18Days
before 18 Years Old
created by : Namira Nur Arfa
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nce upon a time in New York City lived a
handsome boy named Maxwell. He was 17
years old .He lived in his apartment by his own self. He was a really rich person . He worked as a director
in a business . He was a succes person , but he didn’t keep his health . One
day , he felt something wrong in his head . A really strong headache and bled .
Then , he went to a hospital . He thought that he had a migrain but Doctor said
that he contract a brain cancer .Doctor said that his life just about a week more . He felt really sad , he cried ,
he screamed and he felt that his life was collapse .After that, he decided move to a new village , a small village , which
far away from the noisy of a big city like New York . He left his job as a
director , left his glamour life , left his apartment , left his big Business ,
left his luxurious cars and left everything he had . He moved to a small village named Pearlland . He stayed in a house , not too
elegant house but a big house. He brought his violin from his apartment . Day
by day he played his violin . He felt so lonely but this was his want , he want
lonely in his death . When he was playing a song , a cute cat came to his house
and her feet was hurted then Maxwell
gave a plaster in her feet . After that, he fed the cat . Suddenly , she
change into a beautiful Fairy . When he was startled about the miracle , The
fairy introduced her self . Her named was Pearl , she was a beautiful and
nice fairy in this village . That was
why this village named Pearlland .The Fairy said thanks to Maxwell because he
helped her when she was injured. But he
was seen sad then he cried .
“Maxwell , why are you look sad?”
“Pearl, can you give me a miracle?”
“Of course. I’ll give what you want.”
“Really? “
“Of course .Say what you want.”
“Doctor said that i will die , i don’t know
when , maybe now or tommorrow or the day
after tommorow , but he said my death already near .Can i still life until 18
years old?”
“Okay .Now is 1st December , I’ll gave
you 18 days to life and when December 18th exactly when you’re 18th years old you will dead.”
Then the fairy dissapeared. Maxwell’s body
shined then he felt really healthy. Then , he walked around the village . He
looked a really beautiful view , a really fresh air , a shining water and a
nicest summer . Everything were awesome . He was exhausted then he sat under an
apple tree and played his violin. When he was sitting and playing his violin ,
a beautiful girl named Edelweiss observe intently to him . She was really
amazed to a boy who played the violin until she gave an applause for him . He was startled
but happy . He handshaked with Edelweiss . Edelweiss admired him . He was happy
but shy too . He looked at Edelweiss ‘s face and he felt falling in love with
Edelweiss . His heart beat became so
fast , his eyes couldn’t stop to see her eyes , and the world like stopped .
She closer to him then they smiled together . She introduced herself and also
him .After that he promised to her that he will come to that place tommorow at
the same time . Then he went home, he
smiled everytime . He felt falling in love with a girl who took his heart,
Edelweiss . The next day , he went to the place where he met Edelweiss in the
first time and at the same time when he met Edelweiss in the first time . He
amazed to Edelweiss because he looked really beautiful with her yellow dress.
She gripped his hand then they walked to a park.He gave a ring which his
mother’s ring and he brought an aromatic beautiful red rose . Then he asked Edelweiss
to be his girlfriend then Edelweiss accepted him to become her boyfriend . She was so happy Day by day gone .....He
spent his time with his new girlfriend , he was really happy . Sometimes they
went to a lake then paddled the boat, they walked around the village rode a
horse , sang together , danced together , or climbed up the mountain . Then one
day he looked sad.
“Edelweiss , tommorow just my 18Th
birthday and i feel so sad .”
“Why are you so sad, you should be happy of
tomorow my sweetheart.”
“Tomorrow can you come to my house ?”
“Oh yeah , why not .”
Then the next day Edelweiss bought a birthday
cake .She felt strange because he wore a blackdress. She walked to the door , then
she knocked the door . He didn’t answer. She knocked and knocked the door but
still quiet . She found a pink letter . She took it then read it . She cried when
she was reading it .
18th
of December
Dear
Edelweiss ,
Hey
Edelweiss , how are you my honey? Good right? Hey honey , i have to say
something . I have a braincancer , lol. What a craze disease , yeah.. but i
actually contract it. I feel hurted here...in my head , sometimes i bled ,
disgusting right? But forget it , i just wanna say thank you honey for our 18
days together . Altough it is just 18 days , it means a lot for me J . I love you , love you ,
love you so bad and i will miss you L but don’t sad you’ll find
someone better than me . Love you . Thanks for
the 18 great days!
Maxwell
Then she quickly broke the door which made
from a really hard wood and entered his
house . She found many blood in the floor , she ran to his bedroom . She found
maxwell laid in his bed . He was
seen so pale.He bled , then he smiled.
“I love you honey , thanks for our 18 days
together.”
“Hey sweetheart not only 18 days but will be
19 days 20 days and ....”
“Hey , don’t cry cutie ! Why are you using a
blackdress? To come to my burial?”
“no.. no i just i don’t know why , don’t
leave me , please .”
“Today is my 18th birthday and my
last day , i lo....ve yo..u.”
That was the last conversation between
Maxwell and Edelweiss . Edelweiss felt so sad and sorrow. But Maxwell got the
best 18 days on his life .
