Jumat, 21 September 2012

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18Days before 18 Years Old
created by : Namira Nur Arfa

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nce upon a time in New York City lived a handsome boy named  Maxwell. He was 17 years old .He lived in his apartment by his own self. He was a  really rich person . He worked as a director in a business . He was a succes person , but he didn’t keep his health . One day , he felt something wrong in his head . A really strong headache and bled . Then , he went to a hospital . He thought that he had a migrain but Doctor said that he contract a brain cancer .Doctor said that his life just about  a week more . He felt really sad , he cried , he screamed and he felt that his life was collapse .After that,  he decided  move to a new village , a small village , which far away from the noisy of a big city like New York . He left his job as a director , left his glamour life , left his apartment , left his big Business , left his luxurious cars and left everything he had  . He moved to a small village named  Pearlland . He stayed in a house , not too elegant house but a big house. He brought his violin from his apartment . Day by day he played his violin . He felt so lonely but this was his want , he want lonely in his death . When he was playing a song , a cute cat came to his house and her feet was hurted   then Maxwell  gave a plaster in her feet . After that, he fed the cat . Suddenly , she change into a beautiful Fairy . When he was startled about the miracle , The fairy introduced her self . Her named was Pearl , she was a beautiful and nice  fairy in this village . That was why this village named Pearlland .The Fairy said thanks to Maxwell because he helped her when she was injured.  But he was seen sad then he cried .
“Maxwell , why are you look sad?”
“Pearl, can you give me a miracle?”
“Of course. I’ll give  what you want.”
“Really? “
“Of course .Say what you want.”
“Doctor said that i will die , i don’t know when , maybe now  or tommorrow or the day after tommorow , but he said my death already near .Can i still life until 18 years old?”
“Okay .Now is 1st December , I’ll gave you 18 days to life and when December 18th  exactly when you’re  18th years old you will  dead.”
Then the fairy dissapeared. Maxwell’s body shined then he felt really healthy. Then , he walked around the village . He looked a really beautiful view , a really fresh air , a shining water and a nicest summer . Everything were awesome . He was exhausted then he sat under an apple tree and played his violin. When he was sitting and playing his violin , a beautiful girl named Edelweiss observe intently to him . She was really amazed to a boy who played the violin  until she gave an applause for him . He was startled but happy . He handshaked with Edelweiss . Edelweiss admired him . He was happy but shy too . He looked at Edelweiss ‘s face and he felt falling in love with Edelweiss .  His heart beat became so fast , his eyes couldn’t stop to see her eyes , and the world like stopped . She closer to him then they smiled together . She introduced herself and also him .After that he promised to her that he will come to that place tommorow at the same time .  Then he went home, he smiled everytime . He felt falling in love with a girl who took his heart, Edelweiss . The next day , he went to the place where he met Edelweiss in the first time and at the same time when he met Edelweiss in the first time . He amazed to Edelweiss because he looked really beautiful with her yellow dress. She gripped his hand then they walked to a park.He gave a ring which his mother’s ring and he brought an aromatic beautiful red rose . Then he asked Edelweiss to be his girlfriend then Edelweiss accepted him to become her boyfriend  . She was so happy Day by day gone .....He spent his time with his new girlfriend , he was really happy . Sometimes they went to a lake then paddled the boat, they walked around the village rode a horse , sang together , danced together , or climbed up the mountain . Then one day he looked sad.
“Edelweiss , tommorow just my 18Th birthday and i feel so sad .”
“Why are you so sad, you should be happy of tomorow my sweetheart.”
“Tomorrow can you come to my house ?”
“Oh yeah , why not .”
Then the next day Edelweiss bought a birthday cake .She felt strange  because he wore  a blackdress. She walked to the door , then she knocked the door . He didn’t answer. She knocked and knocked the door but still quiet . She found a pink letter . She took it then read it . She cried when she was reading it .

18th of  December
Dear Edelweiss ,
Hey Edelweiss , how are you my honey? Good right? Hey honey , i have to say something . I have a braincancer , lol. What a craze disease , yeah.. but i actually contract it. I feel hurted  here...in my head , sometimes i bled , disgusting right? But forget it , i just wanna say thank you honey for our 18 days together . Altough it is just 18 days , it means a lot for me J . I love you , love you , love you so bad and i will miss you L but don’t sad you’ll find someone better than me . Love you . Thanks for  the  18 great days!
                                        Maxwell
Then she quickly broke the door which made from  a really hard wood and entered his house . She found many blood in the floor , she ran to his bedroom . She found maxwell  laid in his bed . He was seen  so pale.He bled , then he smiled.
“I love you honey , thanks for our 18 days together.”
“Hey sweetheart not only 18 days but will be 19 days 20 days and ....”
“Hey , don’t cry cutie ! Why are you using a blackdress? To come to my burial?”
“no.. no i just i don’t know why , don’t leave me , please .”
“Today is my 18th birthday and my last day , i lo....ve yo..u.”
That was the last conversation between Maxwell and Edelweiss . Edelweiss felt so sad and sorrow. But Maxwell got the best 18 days on his life .


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