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Why is Obesity Dangerous?

            Obesity or overweight is defined as an  abnormal or over fat accumulation that may harm our health. The case of obesity was once considered a problem in developed countries. However, now it is expanded in developing countries. Why is obesity very dangerous for us?
                        As reported by the World Health Organization , at least 2.8 million adults die each year due to being overweight or obesity. There are some disorders or diseases caused by excess weight or obesity. First , obesity can cause weakness of the heart medications that interfere with the heart pump power. Second , along with increasing blood pressure, sugar and blood fat, obese people are highly susceptible to stroke. Third psychosocial problem ,  sometimes obese people lead to depression, especially in women. Then,  recent reports World Health Organization estimates that obesity and living a relaxed responsible for the onset of breast cancer, colon and esophagus. In English, 20-30 thousand cancer cases per year occur in people who suffer from obesity. The last , study of the Framingham Heart Study in the U.S. found that men or women over the age of 40 years and excessive weight (BMI over 30) was estimated to be 7 years shorter than those who have normal weight.
                        The conclusion based on the reasons, we can conclude that obesity  is bad for our healthy . The above facts prove that obesity is dangerous for our life.

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